For critique this week I presented my Apollo 11 eBook.

Here is what I presented.

https://indd.adobe.com/view/1f406887-a5b4-4fd1-a3b4-9452340ae9c9

Once again, we utilised Miro to review each other's work and were encouraged to add sticky notes with our thoughts to each piece. While I didn't receive extensive feedback, apart from one sticky note expressing admiration for the type on page 4, it was still encouraging to know that my efforts are resonating positively.

However, I did receive feedback from my lecturer, suggesting that I add a subheading to my start page, which I agree with as it provides readers with more context before they dive in. Additionally, it was recommended that I use a condensed version of the typeface for the word 'tallest' on page 4 to better fit the space. Although I initially hesitated to make this change, upon revisiting it, I found it to be quite effective in enhancing the overall design.

Here are the changes.

Overall, I found this critique session to be highly beneficial, and it was reassuring to hear positive feedback about my work.