This week, I didn't quite complete my prototype in time for the critique session. Nevertheless, it was still valuable to receive feedback on the progress I had made.
This draft is quite rough, but I believed it was better to present something rather than nothing at all. The navigation bar isn't finalised and is only there to give an idea of how it might look in the final product.
Here's what I presented for critique.
Prototype File
Figma File
We applied the "start, stop, continue" technique, which proved useful in gathering opinions from everyone, not just our lecturer. Here's the feedback I received. While I didn't receive as much input as I had hoped, I still considered the critiques I did receive.
The feedback about my background not matching the style resonates with me, as it was indeed a challenge I faced during creation. Initially, I aimed to evoke a sense of being in space, but upon reconsideration, I believe a darker background could better achieve this effect.
Regarding the paragraphs being too big, I acknowledge this critique, especially since the content is aimed at kids. I plan to address this by shortening the paragraphs and rewriting them in a way that better suits a younger audience.
